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  • A Cuban

    The man maybe, the cigar definitely. Taken in the Little Havana section of Miami back in 2017 when cruising was still safe.

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  • #2
    G'day mate

    Quite dramatic - good mono tones (?incl the slight halo?)
    I wonder whether a tiny bit of smoke would have made a difference?

    Phil
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    • Grumpy John
      Grumpy John commented
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      Thanks for the honest feedback Phil. I hadn't noticed the halo until I uploaded the image. I will revisit this image and make the necessary corrections,

  • #3
    Very nice John. Nice tones and plenty of character there. Did you do a bit of softening around the edges as there is a bit of softening there but the face looks sharp. I quite like the effect.
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    • #4
      Originally posted by wigz View Post
      Very nice John. Nice tones and plenty of character there. Did you do a bit of softening around the edges as there is a bit of softening there but the face looks sharp. I quite like the effect.
      I did a selection of the background and applied a 22Px Gaussian blur to it. That is where the halo Phil spoke of came from.
      I revisited the image and used masks this time and the result is a vast improvement.

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      • Isac
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        Well done mate!. Next - try adding a Curves adjustment on top of your layer stack and drop the brights. To do that just click anywhere on the diagonal line in the Curves panel and type Input = 128 and Output = 90.

    • #5
      There's a lot of character in that face.
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      • #6
        Originally posted by Ozzie_Traveller View Post
        G'day mate

        Quite dramatic - good mono tones (?incl the slight halo?)
        I wonder whether a tiny bit of smoke would have made a difference?

        Phil
        Not sure if this qualifies as a tiny bit of smoke, but here goes.
        Just for the record my wife much prefers the sans smoke image.

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        • Ozzie_Traveller
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          Hi John

          Yeah mate ... some people have better taste than I do so give her a chocky frog !
          Visually your smoke adds a little 'something' to the image, but others here will have the final say

          Phil

        • Grumpy John
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          I found the smoke in this edit unrealistic as it was too sharp. From what I've observed cigar smoke is a lot more "fuzzy' for want of a better word.

      • #7
        I did a quick blur on all the smoke layers using tilt-shift blur, I think that this makes the smoke a bit more realistic.

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        • #8
          I'm beginning to smell something, a super shot...:-)

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